前言

案例讨论与练习

Unit One Content

Case 1-1 Digression from the Topic

Case 1-2 Lack of Real Substance

Case 1-3 Lack of Focal Points

Unit Two Organization

Case 2-1 Lack of a Complete Argumentative Structure

Case 2-2 Lack of Thought in Beginning an Essay

Case 2-3 Lack of a Thesis for Explaining Reasons in an Essay

Case 2-4 Lack of a Thesis for Making Comparisons in an Essay

Case 2-5 Lack of a Thesis in an Argumentative Essay

Case 2-6 Lack of a Thesis in an Expository Essay

Case 2-7 Lack of Transitions in Explaining Reasons

Case 2-8 Lack of Transitions in Making Comparisons

Case 2-9 Lack of Transitions in Presenting Arguments

Case 2-10 Lack of Transitions in Giving an Explanation

Case 2-11 Loose Arrangement of the Middle Paragraph(s)

Case 2-12 Not Allowing Scope for the Cons in Argumentation

Case 2-13 Imbalance Between the Pros and Cons in Argumentation

Case 2-14 Failure to Make Comparisons Point by Point

Case 2-15 Abruptness in Ending an Essay

Unit Three Language Use

Case 3-1 Disagreement Between the Verb and Its Subject

Case 3-2 Unnecessary Shifts in Tense

Case 3-3 Coinage of Chinese English Sentence Patterns

Case 3-4 Dangling Modifiers

Case 3-5 Errors in Parts of Speech

Case 3-6 Wordiness

Case 3-7 Incomplete and Redundant Comparatives

Case 3-8 Ambiguous Use of Pronouns

Unit Four Vocabulary

Case 4-1 Coinage of Chinese English Expressions

Case 4-2 Lack of Variety

Case 4-3 Misused or Misplaced Modifiers

Case 4-4 Misused Collocation of a Noun with Its Adjectives

Case 4-5 Misused Collocation of a Noun with Its Verbs

Unit Five Mechanics

Case 5-1 Misuse of Punctuation,Space and Capitalization

案例点评与练习答案

案例点评与练习答案

部分常用名词与动词、形容词的搭配

主要参考书目

谋篇思路与弱点图析